Do your English writing students have an eye for detail? These editing practice questions might help your students develop the skill of noticing.
Editing is a tough skill to teach. It needs lots of patience, practice and preparation. Patience because it’s something which students need to do by themselves. Practice because the brain needs to be trained to find errors. Preparation because teachers need a good supply of language appropriate materials.
These practice questions can help ESL teachers with the last part. You will find four short editing practice questions. Each passage has about 100 words, so the challenge isn’t overwhelming for students. More than a sentence and less than a 2 page text, it is satisfying.
There are 4 levels. These roughly correspond to text complexity based on some work I did years ago with extensive listening stories. Most of the words come from the New General Service List, so it’s level appropriate for a wide range language learners and classroom situations.
Give students a passage (or display on a screen). The students are asked to fix the mistakes. There are many kinds of mistakes:
- Add punctuation to create sentences
- Add space to create paragraphs
- Add capitalisation
- Fix spelling errors
- Fix subject verb agreement
- Verb form, plural form and word form errors
There is no need to add sentences.
The 4 passages are below. I have also included a pdf which has the (link here) text editing answers. To help a wide range of teachers, the answers are presented in two formats: each passage on a separate page (good for classroom projectors) and a one pager with all four answers (good for printing).
Some might disagree with my paragraph suggestions. I approached this task from a modern, web context where text has lots of white space and short paragraphs. Not many ESL students are versed in classical paragraph formation.
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