Intermediate Writing, Spring, Week 4

ESL Writing

This is fourth week of the semester for the 2nd year English writing class.

Work Plan – Week 4

  1. rewrite #1 – second or third draft of Room 8
  2. rewrite #2 – second draft of creative story (from a picture prompt and first sentence exercise)
  3. rewrite #3 – short story with lots of new information
  4. start #4 – writing exercise to improve paragraph structure

Other stuff

  1. review last week
  2. extra resources
  3. homework
  4. feedback

ESL Writing Activities

Hour 1

Attendance, review, extra stuff, homework (10)


  • importance of first sentence to create reader interest (e.g. humour, drama, contrast, superlatives)
  • use questioning strategy to add more details and fill in information gaps
  • feedback on writing

Something to read?

  • Stir the imagination with this novel, The Stranger by Albert Camus.
  • An existential theme that shows simple sentences can create a wonderful story, and suspense.

ESL Class Homework for Next Week


Can’t remember all of the traits?

  • Here is a quick summary: 6+1 writing traits.
  • Need more details about the traits, review the slides below.

Writing work and feedback (25)

Hours 1 and 2

Opportunities for Improvement (40)

  • Last week – #1 first sentence
  • Last week – #2 more details
  • This week – #3 better paragraphs


Problem: Students don’t create proper paragraphs.

  • Good paragraph structure is an essential part of good writing. Paragraphs make the story easier to read by organizing ideas into small groups.
  • Here is an exercise which forces students to create many separate paragraphs.


Click here to read the ESL writing activity about better paragraph structure.

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