Teacher Training Writing Class: Week 1

WRITING CLASS PART 1

In this first class of the week, the trainees:

  • Read a short descriptive paragraph about a subway station. This was used as a model for the pre-writing assignment.
  • Wrote short sentences using a puzzle prompt about a man crossing a river with a boat, goat, wolf and head of cabbage. The purpose of this writing assignment was to use a variety of verbs to describe similar actions and focus on the proper use of articles.

WRITING CLASS PART 2

Section 1

Five things to learn about good writing:

  1. Remove needless words.
  2. Describe complex ideas with simple words.
  3. A paragraph  talks about one idea.
  4. Topic sentences are mini-thesis sentences.
  5. The best writing talks about big ideas with specific details.

Section 2

Here is an ESL video lesson that uses animation to build vocabulary and fluency skills. It’s a four-part ESL activity.

The video is called Howl. It was made by students who graduated from Bezalel academy of Art and Design in Israel.

Howl from Natalie Bettelheim on Vimeo.

1. Key Vocabulary

  • shadow
  • crawl
  • chew
  • growl
  • lamppost
  • moonlight
  • secret passage

2. BRAINSTORM

Brainstorm the word HOWL. What does it mean, What ideas come to your head when you think of howling.

3. WATCH THE VIDEO

Watch the video. Make notes about 2 different kinds of things. One is the activities that are part of daily life. Second, the unusual things you see in the video.

Howl from Natalie Bettelheim on Vimeo.

4. WRITE A SUMMARY

Now, make a summary of the story with your partner.

Write about the plot, the location, the characters, the action, the surprises and the ending.

Does this story have a message? What’s the point?

Section 3

Remember Dr. Seuss.

Section 4

What: Write 3 to 5 paragraphs.

Purpose: Describe clearly your idea/opinion with evidence that uses personal experience.

  1. Look at the popular expressions/proverbs below.
  2. Discuss the meaning of these phrases with your partner.
  3. Be sure to define the key words in each sentence.
  4. Do you think they are true or not true? Explain your answer by talking about your personal experience.
  5. You will probably want to write two paragraphs. In the first paragraph, you might have a thesis sentence (your main idea), explain the expression/proverb and define the important words. The second paragraph might describe your experience and how it makes you agree or disagree with the expression/proverb.

Expressions

  1. Money is the root of all evil.
  2. Two heads are better than one.
  3. Might is right.
  4. Don’t count your chickens before they are hatched.
  5. Don’t rock the boat.
  6. Patience is a virtue.

Writing Style Tips

Teaching ESL students how to write English stories and essays with style can be a challenge. What is style, anyway?

LEARN WRITING STYLE

Here are a few examples of how to write English with style. These come from Writing Tools: 50 Essential Strategies for Every Writer. This style tip encourages writers to use four numbers to improve their style.

One

A single idea in a short sentence can make a great impact. For example:

  • I have a dream.
  • Just do it.
  • “It’s kind of fun to do the impossible.”

Read more

Student Writing Samples

Here are some examples of ESL student writing as they learn to write English poems, particularly Japanese haiku.

 

Rain is falling down, still

Trees are suppressing and waiting

Under he trees, you are

 

Cherry blossoms bloom

A girl standing with a smile

Waiting for someone

 

the son of sun

hot today, hot tomorrow

maybe we died

 

the sound of silence

nobody can hear, but can feel

it’s in the darkness

 

children don’t know me

and they shouldn’t know know me wholly

I am the failure